Online: Lucy, Liliya, Shaul, Pat, Szabi, Vuk, Michael Coughlin, Claudia, David Williams, Alexandra Corsi, … and more
notes
Submit by 9 am Tuesday morning, or Monday afternoon.
Review of status:
project summary – not written yet. Manuela and SH working on this this week.
Investigators list - add your specialty, experiments you’re associated with, and MA
Overview: ignore all text there. Real text not written yet. Manuela and SH will write.
Results from Prior NSF. Josh is in charge.
Looks disjointed, but that may be inevitable.
1st paragraph is exec summary. Collab deals with much of NSF.
will get paper count in few days.
if people have 1 clause papers to highlight send to Josh. probably can add.
Intellectual merit and broader impact are not separated out. Due to space.
both are mixed in and should be clear enough.
Can add references. feel free to add lists of your references
Manuela: can do just last names to save space.
Josh: don't think we'd gain a line. and this reads as friendlier.
SH: agree with Manuela, but if no savings that's fine. Don't need grant numbers. LF: no grant numbers? SH: yes, instructions are different from most NSF proposals.
SH: concerned that Intellectual Merit and Broader Impacts aren't called out. don't want to annoy NSF's format.
SH: please send broader impact results to SH, Josh
VM: maybe don't need a paragraph per person? could put all GW in 1 paragraph. or similar. group by field. LF: I agree.
LF: could be narrative format? SH: yes is fine.
Josh: could do intellectual merit organized by the 4 MAs. broader impact is 5th category. can do tonight
SH: keep names while reorganizing, not just projects/achievements.
Josh: if only last names with do bold to call out to reviewer. (note 2 William's, to Marka's)
SH: feel free to ping lots of people.
Szabi: in past had complaints from reviewers about people with prior support from non-NSF places. might want to short circuit problems.
MA4: (david, lucy, …)
Szabi: yes, should distinguish high/low-energy neutrinos. (different detection method and different origins)
SH: cosmic high-energy neutrinos section modified to call out:
modeling (like blazars) to explain background, models inform observing plans.
SH: additional background possibilities (SNe). contingent on using proprietary IceCube data.
SH: 3rd possibility. do a census of all sources to explain background. Conflicts with first paragraph saying some of these are negligible.
Cosmic ray accelerators:
1st paragraph on galactic cosmic rays. not clear what will be done.
2nd paragraph is extragalatic CRs. all we say is we can model sources. need consensus that that is what we should do.
SN neutrinos from next supernova. from Justin?
BZ: these are low energy neutrinos? in IceCube.
??: galactic supernova will be seen at high SNR.
can ask Yong Qian he is expert on this.
SH: done editing. Please DW, LF go over and fix the things I broke. Will talk to Yong Qian.