Telecon Notes Dec. 19, 2018
Attendance: Tim P., Jamie B., Jacques D., Amy T., Raphael F., Nick B., Bill J., Charles L.
Notes by: Karl
Agenda
Schedule: Report due on January 14.
Report Mechanics
Re-release of engineering document scheduled for tomorrow
From now on, limited *and coordinated* editing, please.
Authorships/Endorsements - plan to release another version Friday, and a reminder after the beginning of the year.
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Executive Summary in progress
Introduction will be replaced with 'Preliminaries'; 80% complete.
Fundamental Physics
Extragalactic
'First Luminous Source' - complete
Other (lensing, halo lensing, compton-Y) being rearranged - text tomorrow noon Central?
Galactic - 100%
Legacy - 98% complete.
Foregrounds - Needs review (SH) but Interesting Progress from Mathieu
Mathieu plot:

Systematics - Done
Requirements - Needs review (SH)
Engineering - 98% done (SH to review)
Cover page
Parameter Constraints
Taglines
Notes
Schedule: Report due on January 14.
Report Mechanics
Re-release of engineering document scheduled for tomorrow. We're back on standard PICO repot.
From now on, limited and coordinated editing, please. Talk with Shaul before editing.
Authorships/Endorsements - plan to release another version Friday, and a reminder after the beginning of the year.
Status of writing
Updated version goal of this weekend. Monday 12/24 at latest.
Executive Summary in progress
Introduction will be replaced with 'Preliminaries'; 80% complete.
give general definitions like EE, BB, CBE, Baseline etc. Talks about comparisons to things like S3 and SO.
Idea is to give the reader the background they need.
JB: Is S4 comparison discussed? SH: No direct quantitative comparisons. Some qualitative comparisons are mentioned. General ground complementarity is discussed.
AT: May consider introducing what the subsections of Chapt 2 are. Some guidance to readers.
AT: Science chapter starts with sentence on instrument. This is odd for the science section. Ideally document would flow science –> instrument to do that science.
SH: Makes sense. What about separating the 'Preliminaries' into its own section. And Science is chapter 3.
AT: I recommend 1 is EC that has highlights on science and instrument. 2 is science and focuses on that. Avoid saying “here's the instrument we designed, look at the science we can do.”
Fundamental Physics
Extragalactic
'First Luminous Source' - complete
Other (lensing, halo lensing, compton-Y) being rearranged - text tomorrow noon Central?
Galactic - 100%
Legacy - 98% complete.
Foregrounds - Needs review (SH) but Interesting Progress from Mathieu
Systematics - Done
Requirements - Needs review (SH)
Engineering - 98% done (SH to review)
Cover page
Most people prefer top left figure.
AT: these updates don't have new ideas from EC members.
AT: None of these are final. Hopefully these provide all the elements we want. Opinions?
AT: Just a comment. Having text on the cover is uncommon. But it seems we have decided to go in this direction.
SH: One concern was if the text on cover is obviously science goals. Or people might think we were just describing the universe.
JB: Like version 1 because it shows spacecraft. Like version 2 because it is new/different and looks cool.
JD: Don't like science topics scattered around. Keeping the line is better. No inflation in science topics?
AT: imagining 2 new versions. 1st, Top left but with some maturing. 2nd, eye with spacecraft at center. PICO text moves.
Parameter Constraints
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JD: Stronger model testing of LCDM.
SH: Maybe we put all the factor of 2's like n_s, n_run.
AvE: Important to distinguish between completed experiments (Planck) and planned experiments (SO or S4). Need to do much better than Planck, but marginally better than SO is more defensible.
SH: Jacques, can you write a paragraph on a broad view of this? JD: Yes, will do as soon as possible